Like Legend, a poem
49Surreal the Mist
Mist lies like legend
along the hollows,
the cups in
the field.
How can anyone
doubt the existance
of God?
She is Everywhere.
Power seeps from
the sky into
our bones.
Snow covers a
multitude of sins
in our hearts,
If we try,
this is the only
day that ever was.
and we are
born again,
With hope.
It sticks in the head-
applying for the position
of human,,,
so few now seem to
want the job.
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Hi, lily I always love your poems, and you know what they say, when God made men She was only joking! ha ha!
I agree Lily. Male and female are only for the flesh. God is everything and does not distinguish or discriminate because of sex.
Recently I also saw this same sight but without the snow. The mist rose just as you describe and the power in that beauty took my breath away. I shall accept the position of human until I leave for my spiritual home. In a world of so much inhumanity, we need all we can get. May we all be cleansed and make every sunrise the first day-a new beginning.
Are you surprised to hear me say I adore this poem? I thought not.
Oh, but I always pause for you, Nell, and Hy, because usually your comments are more beautiful than my poem.. sending you both love, lily
This was a good poem but since it was mentioned in a comment before me, I have to say, the Bible that I read mentions God as our heavenly father, now I'm really confused. LOL.
Yeah. Umm. Don't be. God gives us free will. I usually consider God in the male, but it can be interpreted other ways. God Bless, lily
Lily,
Thank you for writing such a beautiful poem for me. I shall have to bookmark this one and when I get the chance to get some ink in my printer I will have to print this out and I might just add it to my book of shadows. This was very sweet of you.
I must say that I really love the part that states "If we try, this is the only day that ever was. And we are born again with hope."
Simply beautiful Lily and of course voted up dear friend. Once again thank you.
Voted INTERESTING! Thanks for sharing.
Thanks Crecent, and banish that fear while your at it, you know ,what percentage of bad things that you imagine really do happen? Close to zero? Well, there you are! I'd be honored to be in your Book of Shadows... thank you, Ms Dora! lily
This is the only day that ever was. Unfortunately we try to live in our yesterdays or in our tomorrows and we miss the beautiful mist in the hollows and the snow and the skies. Like Hypen, I too would like to apply!!
Simply profound poetry, (how’s that for a contradiction), just the way I like it.
Awesomes votes and more from me.
Thank you fennel! lily
lilyfly Hub Author 5 months ago
Crecent, this was for you, Hy, donj't hurl, God is not a particular sex... love yaz, lily